I won't be original since people above wrote a lot. Still, it's opened topic so I'd like to share thoughts from my point of view. Meilyn's said she'd like not to be judged for bad english or something like this. I assume it just as some kind of standards. English isn't my native language too but I'm not afraid of making mistakes because I want to improve my english. Plus me and my friends here, in 3dxchat, are from different countries and sometimes one of us can write something that others won't understand. We don't judge, we don't laugh, we ask to explain - this all depends on who surround you. As for your example I can say it's normal and pretty full description of action even for me since my english isn't that good as yours guys. You must be just unlucky to find right roleplayers... *Advertesement time* There's an organizations, The Quiet Temple, that unite a number of really good roleplayers. If you can't find right people in the game, try this one. Best wishes