My first 3dxchat vid on pornhub!

[LadyLayla]

Well, the server is down, none of us know what's going on, but that don't stop me from learning a few new tricks!

I decided to teach myself a little video editing...

 

Here's the first result

 

https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph5be74cbed9bba

 

(you gotta excuse me, it's not perfect, yes I know the cursor is visible in a few screens, I'll do better next time)

[Aliviax]

nice tho u need better lights in the house so graphics are shown on their true potential 

well i know uploading lowers the quality  but i can see there are no good lights in the room .

now since i mentioned lights 

i have test hundrends of lights n colors etc best light that makes skin looks cool are on  light blue range and requires a lil shine on ur skin not to much .

also the position of the lights so they hit body in a good way

yes i know im maniac with lights

[Aliviax]

example look pics below day n night i have lights even in day to get a nice result to shoot pics

 

you can see how nice the skin looks with nice lights

 

Also night 4 now and those light works in all nights mode 

[omgitsjaime]

GooD JoB, LAYLA!

 

I recommend changing the title to Cumpany Retreat!

 

[LadyLayla]

@Kittycat: Wanna join? I guess we gotta wait for the server to be back....

 

@Aliviax: You're absolutely right, this was my first try, I even transformed the scenes with Openshot because they were too dark. I'm already shooting my next one at the beach in bright daylight... I'll look into the lights for the third production :-)

[Aliviax]

lights is a must in this game

and its a nice hobby to have in game   

[SlaveToDesire]

I'm rather nit picky, but I can understand someone's limited resources.

 

Lighting, mood, setting, sound.

 

Lighting is bland at best. But it is the more "natural" lighting of minimal lights and moonlit, something could've been done to adjust this better with contrasting lighting possibly a blue hue to really say "it's night." Maybe orange or red for more mood set lighting. Something more so to highlight the bodies.

 

Mood, could've used some work. Actual people around maybe even a visual between the two in first person. Or keeping it simple, smooth the camera motion and adjustments with strong focus towards motion (intercourse) scenes. Sure one angle to the female kissing than sucking, why not try to incorporate this smoother? Granted animation in game is minimal, small things make big changes.

 

Setting, it's rather played and typical. A "company" vacation. Yet you didn't even play it out as "cumpany." Also "other colleagues" where are they? This could've so easily been played as "Damn she looks amazing in that outfit, if I could just get away from them...." And frankly I'm not one for reading into a setting.

 

Sound, seriously that song? Are we about to watch cheech and chong, the theme was "company retreat" in my lucky case it means party and clubs. House, EDM, pop. Strip That Down by Liam Payne, Get Lucky by Daft Punk, Say it Right by Nelly Furtado, Taste by Tyga. Just a few examples of good flirtatious songs. I hate Tyga personally, but the beat in taste makes my hips and ass move. Outside of that, I wouldn't have recorded it in stereo comes out grainy and poppy. As well I would've cut the audio of the game, overlay voice acting and maybe ambiance song or sounds for atmosphere.

 

4.5/10 - Not a bad first project but it's obvious work.