Malestrom Posted November 22, 2016 Share Posted November 22, 2016 First time I tried to use this Forum.. Here are a couple of Poems.. I have many more but we will see how people like them..or dislike them..LOL Thanks for having a look... (may re-post something at a later time.. got way to many negative comments..to many condescending comments, Criticism is fine and I received some valued input but being a jackass for the sake of being a jackass is unacceptable!) Since you did click here I will give you a poem/song to read..Not mine.. Guess who wrote the Song and the title.. find me in 3DXchat tell me and I will give you a gift for your efforts you can usually find me at the Sin Club.. Happy guessing.. Good Luck----> One night as I walked down some long and winding roadI saw you and I knew I couldn't let you goHalf child and all woman a vivid fantasyCast against the moonlight and bathed in ecstasyLeather skin and cats eyes has the Jungle made you wildThe prey your after, if your faster will it make you smileRide with me I will set you freeChains can't hold us downI need you, If you want meLovers we are bound (Refrain-I am leaving out the refrain as the title is in it and it would be to easy to guess..LOL.. Sorry) Skin tight you move in so slowly to thrillWaiting for the nighttime and then you're in for the killAmazon so sleekly, you know what to doEat the flesh and save my heartAnd leave it when your throughThe pain and pleasures all mineUntamed and running wildSink your teeth into meLick your lips and smileTake my hand And ride the landForever you and meHold on tight to me all nightAnd set your spirit free (Refrain) Come find me and let me know who wrote this song and its title and I will give you a gift.. usually in Sin Club See ya.. Happy guessing.. Nymphpott 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest beccie Posted November 22, 2016 Share Posted November 22, 2016 Well that cheered me up good and proper on a dark and rainy Tuesday morning :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Cordelia Posted November 22, 2016 Share Posted November 22, 2016 Apart from the spelling errors (sorry, to me, they stand out), I quite enjoyed them.I am sure you will get negative criticism, due to the content, but don't let that deter you from producing more.Better to articulate something well than not express yourself at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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